"Given the topic, the juxtaposition of personal narrative and expository writing makes sense. That said, the expository sections rely heavily on source material and you leave little room to develop a sophisticated rhetorical purpose. B"There's definitely room for improvement in this essay, but a B from Dr. Brauer is like an A from some other professors, so in the end I was still very happy with the outcome.
Essay: When Bears and Humans Collide
Greg Heil Wednesday, January 09, 2013
This was my final essay for my Advanced Composition course in the spring of 2012. The assignment was to write a multi-genre paper that combined several different genres of writing into one effective whole. Dr. Brauer's final comment reads: