Essay: Internet Censorship Will Prevent our Students from Innovating and Succeeding in this Ever-Changing World

This is a short essay that I wrote for my Advanced Composition course during the spring of 2012. The final comment reads:
"Your tone and general organization are solid, but you need to balance the exposition on the benefits of blogging and blogging with more reflection and sustained argument. B+"
I'll take a B+ since Dr. Brauer is a hard grader, but I do take issue with his final comment. We had a very short word limit and as such there was only room for a limited amount of information. "More reflection and sustained argument" would have required many more words, hence the reason my argument was not "sustained."